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Post by .:Jay-Rose:. on Nov 20, 2008 20:55:02 GMT -5
Puppet
Posession Like a rag doll in the hands of a master Puppet, dance on your strings The stage is your fantasy and without it who you are is lost In the eyes of thousands you are flawless, every stitch in place, no loose threads But to me, you are a rag doll in the hands of your abusers puppet, cut your strings be free, untangle your arms and your legs the threads will stay attatched forever a part of you as a reminder but you are no longer a rag doll love, run down the aisles and through the doors the world is ready to see who you really are
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Post by H stands for Horror on Nov 20, 2008 21:01:02 GMT -5
Oh cool, I like it. I would say you overused the word ragdoll and should have used something else for variation, but it's good.
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Post by .:Jay-Rose:. on Nov 20, 2008 21:02:21 GMT -5
I wanted the repetition of ragdoll... It was supposed to be used a lot... I just wouldn't say overused Nonetheless, thanks glad you enjoyed!
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