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Post by H stands for Horror on Nov 14, 2008 18:22:58 GMT -5
SchizophreniaA poem in the perspective of my wolf character named Stone I just want you to shut up Please, just be quiet before I go crazy Are you sure you're fake? If you were wouldn't you go away? I'm so lost without you So don't you ever even think About leaving me alone I really don't know what I'd do I can't fathom my loss Should you ever go I think I might just die So please, just shut your mouth I don't care if you're just a voice Get out of my head! Can't you tell I hate you? Won't you just vanish? Will you ever leave me alone? I can't tell you what I want.
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Post by .:Jay-Rose:. on Nov 14, 2008 20:38:55 GMT -5
I really love this poem! I've written a new one that your poem reminds me of, called Panic. I wrote it at about ten last night and haven't looked at it since, so I'm not sure how good it is.
Nonetheless, I'll add it to my thread. Just not right now, because I've got to go to the movies...
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Post by H stands for Horror on Nov 15, 2008 22:48:40 GMT -5
Okay, cool. I'll go take a look at it. ^^ And I'm glad you like my poem. =]
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Post by .:Jay-Rose:. on Dec 6, 2008 10:37:54 GMT -5
I think we should put this at the start of the book, with my Panic poem following it.
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Post by H stands for Horror on Dec 10, 2008 21:49:24 GMT -5
Oh, yeah, but then again, everyone would then realize the secret about jason's blackouts...
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