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Post by .:Jay-Rose:. on Nov 17, 2008 20:11:32 GMT -5
Untrustworthy little liar, little bitch He was too good for you But gave you a chance Should have listened should have taken the advice Everyone told him They said you were bad news They sent warnings She's a liar, she's bitch And a slut But he took you in, defended you when they told the truth The truth he should have known Then you repaid him with pain Knives, needles, flame to the heart Burnt him down and blew away the ashes you'll be crying when the next girl picks up the pieces and puts them back together Wrote this about a friend's ex girlfriend. I'm here for you, BB
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Post by H stands for Horror on Nov 17, 2008 20:16:32 GMT -5
That's cool, I like it ^^
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Post by .:Jay-Rose:. on Nov 17, 2008 20:27:41 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by H stands for Horror on Nov 22, 2008 16:21:22 GMT -5
You should make it so that swear words aren't sensored though just because it takes away from the feeling of the peom to have then like that. ^^
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Post by .:Jay-Rose:. on Nov 22, 2008 16:27:56 GMT -5
I think I need to modify the forum rules for this...
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Post by H stands for Horror on Nov 22, 2008 16:32:46 GMT -5
Hmm, yeah, probably.
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Post by .:Jay-Rose:. on Nov 22, 2008 16:33:29 GMT -5
Done and done.
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Post by H stands for Horror on Nov 22, 2008 16:40:13 GMT -5
How interesting! Lol
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Post by .:Jay-Rose:. on Nov 22, 2008 16:42:58 GMT -5
Que? What is THAT supposed to mean?
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Post by H stands for Horror on Nov 22, 2008 16:51:14 GMT -5
Oh, weeeeell, now that you ask.... Lol, jk
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Shiloh
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Post by Shiloh on Nov 22, 2008 21:44:18 GMT -5
That one is cool. I dunno about me ever writing something that intense, nut it shows strong feeling. Good job!
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Post by .:Jay-Rose:. on Nov 23, 2008 9:46:17 GMT -5
Most of my writing is a bit intense about negative feeling. I don't find the need to write about good stuff as much.
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Post by H stands for Horror on Nov 23, 2008 14:07:59 GMT -5
I know what you mean Jay...
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Shiloh
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A team is only as fast as their slowest player.
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Post by Shiloh on Nov 24, 2008 19:12:00 GMT -5
Ahhh... releasing negative energy. Thats better than slitting your wrists!
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Post by .:Jay-Rose:. on Nov 24, 2008 19:24:48 GMT -5
I've never had the desire to do that, thankfully.
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